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Holy lord in heaven
Commander of snow and fire
Kneeling I cry and tear
Forgive me Father, a crime of passion
In corner I see bleeding eyes of Joy
Staring, atop my red dripping ceiling

Gasping, I wipe the sweaty brow
Oh mirror, what dreams I see
How they make me fear
For those passing seconds that linger
A planted seed of mind, a sinister voice

But I retreat into a distant land
Where critters come alive
They sing my name, and I gorge
Deep in their grey palaces, I feast
And the sweet nectar I sip
Content I go to rest and lie
But feel them digging deep
The leeches, almost here
Scrape and tear , my eye enters
But blinded I settle into the white
And fall into a distant land

And wake upon a beautiful site
Of starry skies and lamenting owls
I try to budge but frozen I lie
And see to my dismay
Crashing the grey metal falls
Gloom swells my soul
Part my lips but only
Joy's yells of pain, I hearWww@QuestionHome@Com

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