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Question: Collaborative poem!?
Hi,

I'm trying this again because folks can't follow instructions!. So please, follow my directions before adding on!.

Stanza must be six lines!.
The sixth line must match my sixth line!.
The stanza may be about anything that brings you extreme amounts of joy, not just music, and only gets better until it maxes out, like what I wrote about me and music!.

I am trying to get at least ten stanzas or more

I want to get a good piece going so I can perform it at an art show I featured at to show how collaboration can happen anywhere with anyone!.

Ciao


when your favorite songs come on
and you turn up the volume
to get totally rocked
and then the next song is even better
but the volume won’t go any higher
yeah, it’s like that

Now here is one great submission I've gotten and I want more! This will be so awesome!.

when you see a pretty girl
on a lovely spring day
you just can't help but smile
and you're really gone when she smiles back
but you don't know her name
yeah, it's like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
when your heart races at her sight
in the soft moon light
you go to kiss her lips
and gently touch her hips
you can feel her heart go rad tat tat
yeah, it’s like that

Edit: OR

My heart races at her sight
and I feel high in the soft moon light
happiness is to gently kiss her lips
and run my hands up her hips
just to hear her heart go rad tat tat
yeah, it’s like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com