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Question: Had to get it out!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.any comments!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
Now it's too late!.
Don't know why I tried!.
I should have taken my own advice!.
Should have walked away!.
Lesson learned!.!.!.
once again!.
Why did I call you friend!?
Now it's too late!.
You've done your deed!.
You insisted to prove to me,
that I don't matter again!.
Don't worry!.
Lesson learned!.
Now it's too late!.
Don't ever call me friend!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like because it is like you are randomly bringing your thoughts to paper!. This gives authenticity to your words and allows us to more feel the emotions!. Am I still your friend!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked it and it was a good way to get it out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep,this is a good one!.

I love the short, to the point, expressions that just kills you with honesty!. I find that here bigtime in your piece!.
And I like the "lesson learned" expression that serves to teach!. We, after all, are learning over and over, life lessons in this living experience!.
Nicely done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

damn that was awesome!. that poem rock!. ur good at poetry!. who ever ur mad at needs to watch out!. i would rate that as a 10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope I've not done anything to make you so mad!. I think of all my contacts as my friends!. Well, it's a good outlet if someone did do you wrong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

man have i been there!.!.!.!.i like it!. like it alot!.!.!.!.good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com