Do you think this poem will suck?

Question: Do you think this poem will suck!?

i've just started a new poem and i don't want to keep doing it if it promises to suck early on!. :D

the forest crumbles
as it welcomes soft, gentle rain
dancing gracefully in the air
approaching the earth
like ballerinas in white tutus
carefully spinning on icy toesWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I would start this out with something like "The forest comes alive" so that the rest of the delicate and fanciful imagery ties into it better!. It is most definately worth continuing to work on as those images are lovely!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nah!.!.!.it's still fine!.!.!.continue on!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It goes from somber reflection to whimsy in an instant!. Which do you want!.!.!.also!.!.!.both can be made to not suck!.!.!.un-suck!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com

its very nice beautiful start go on because it sound really good so far!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would say the style sort of changes from "as it welcomes soft, gentle rain" and then on!. Your focus changed from the whole of the forest to the gentle rain which is completely fine, however seems a little inconsistent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My friend poetry could never suck, unless you believe your soul sucks, for poetry is the language of the soul!. Of course I do not believe your poem sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com