It's business, not personal. Do you agree?

Question: It's business, not personal!. Do you agree!?

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by TD Euwaite

If not for the rope
My neck would not stretch
And the bank that I robbed
Won’t go broke

It’s easy for me
To see that you need
For me to swing from
The old Oak

Let’s talk over tea
Most respectfully
Regarding the width
Of my throat…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

TD, I fear you have along with others turned me into a critic!. Stanza one!.!.!.try this
If not for the rope,
My neck would not stretch
The bank that that I robbed
Will never go broke!.

Just by changing three words it flows better!. LOL I like this!.

Stanza 2

It's easy for me
To see that you need
For me to swing
From the Oak tree!.

Better!?

Stanza 3

Let's talk over tea,
Most respectfully
Regarding the width
Of my throat naturally!.

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I don't know if you like it better or not, but i thought I'd take a shot at critiquing one of yours!. I only changed a few things and I think it flows much more smoothly!.!.!.kind of like a body, slowly swinging in the breeze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Preparation is everything in execution!Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol!. it's good!.
i love the ending!.!.!.i mean seriously, it's good!. but, i don't get the bank part!? but it's probably just me!. it is too cool!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

DON'T LEAVE US!!! If you are having suicidal thoughts please seek medical or spiritual help immediately!. All life is precious!.!.!.

yeah, right!. Kidding!. Loved the poem!. It is business, therefore I do not take it personally, or seriously!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice poem!.!.!.yea, me too, I can't see what's the bank for!.!.well the poem is still good, though!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good poem TD, although I'm not sure anything ever went down this smoothly!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trying to publish two books at the same time can make one feel like swinging--and I mean from a tree! Hang in there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This interesting, humorous!. Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

erm suicidal!? hang in there buddy =pWww@QuestionHome@Com

This time tomorrow
Reckon where I'll be
Down in some lonesome valley
Hangin' from a white oak treeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Stretch that tea time indefinitely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No noose is good noose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's all business & I didn't take it personal !.!.!.!.!.!.Most respectfully!.!.!.!.!.!. It was quite goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Guillotines did a very clean job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YIKES! He sounds like a sneaky one!
Keep your eye on your tea!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Eeek, Annabell! ( Neck-tie parties are very cultured, I'll have you know!)Www@QuestionHome@Com