This poem is champing at the bit. Should I just let it run?

Question: This poem is champing at the bit!. Should I just let it run!?

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Electra
by TD Euwaite

Hey
wait for me
while I climb down from this tree
One shoe on, the other, I don’t see

Don’t
run so fast
that’s a lifetime you’ve just passed
Speed will get you there, if you last

Please
stop and breath
pull a flower from your sleeve
Give it to the one you know believes

Go
be the show
be the one who always glows
I will wait for you, walking slow

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

What a wonderful pattern! Your best so far for me today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey, hey!!
i liked it!.!.!.!.alote!!! :)
I give it a 9 out of 10!!!
You are very good at this and you seem to write alote of poems!!
Very nice!!

have a great day!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

TD, this is simply amazing, and I know I say that so often, but only because it's true!. I love the format, the rhyme scheme and the name!. But I think you had a lazy fingers issue with the word "breathe!." Don't worry, I understand, do it all the time myself!. For some reason, the line "that's a lifetime you've just passed" really stands out to me!. I love it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thought it was good!.!.!. I found it to be a bit humorousWww@QuestionHome@Com

Reminds me of http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=DoWF2YalY!.!.!.
Drat, that link is supposed to go to "Feeling Groovy" Simon and Garfunkel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you okay!?
I ask or say
I can see who will win this race
look at the pace
Yeah please wait
so you can have a mate
don't you want any company
from some like me!?
Don't go too fast
I can see you have already past
I will catch up to you
and it is true
We will see who will be a winner
and to have dinner!.
I will get by
but until then it is good bye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this poem!. Both speeds have their time and place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If she looks like the comic book Electra, you might want to move a little faster! But with your fertile imagination I am sure you can dream while waiting!. Nicely said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it !! Either pace !.!.!.running OR walking slow !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Make it thereWww@QuestionHome@Com

not slow
not fast
half fastWww@QuestionHome@Com