Critique My Poem:: Our Love Will Not Be Forever?

Question: Critique My Poem:: Our Love Will Not Be Forever!?

Our love will not be for ever
There will be time to depart
When the dark clouds cover the skies
When the stillness fill the air
when the smile vanish from our face
When your sight will bring only memory
When we turn around and say good byeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That's was good but very sad!. Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com