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Question: Do you have feedback on my poem about mending relationships!?
Because love lives on
and lives on in me!.
I could never give up
for they mean the world to me!.

Yes, I was damaged-
the pain and sorrow surreal!.
And yes, I even doubted
if I would ever heal!.

But because I know the Lord,
and the love inside of me,
I knew that if I had faith
a healing there would be!.

Once a hated enemy,
time was now my friend!.
As we waited upon the Lord
and for relationships to mend!.

Yes, because love lives on
and lives on in me!.
I didn't give up
for they mean the world to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it is a great poem of hope!.!.!.!.thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a strong poem of faith, not giving up on what He can do in your life!. It's a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com