An acrostic poem for mother's day. Please comment.?

Question: An acrostic poem for mother's day!. Please comment!.!?

"mother"

Mom why did you do it,
Often beat on me!.
The pain you caused
Hurt so bad
Even now I feel the sting!.
Repent and I forgive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This poem made me cry!. I can feel your deep, deep pain!. It brought back my abusive memories too!. I'll never understand why people commit such atrocities on others!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG such a total opposite with what we normally expect to hear on mother's day!. A very short, yet very powerful poem!. Keep it up!. I like this acrostic better than your regular form of poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's a good poem!.

It's honest and it has a lot of heart and feelings put in to it!.

Hopefully she would repent!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A huge message lies in this short poem!.

Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very powerful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Harsh, cruel!. You were abused too by your mother!? Huh!.!.!. Mine beat me for everything you can't even imagine, "Mommy dearest" is a saint comparing it to mine!.

I'm with you with this situation!.

Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem took me by surprise!. Actually, this is a sort of lesson for me having grown up abused by a step father in all ways possible!. I forget that sometimes mothers are the abusers too!. It's just hard for me to fathom that a mother is capable of such acts as I would never dream of hurting my children in any way!. I'm sorry that these are the memories that come to you during what should be a celebration of mothers!. My heart goes out to you and thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sad!.
Not what I expected!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You write well however there are better words you could use to get your point across!. I was under the impression your mother was dead repent how!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bringing honesty into the open sometimes promotes healing
BlessingsWww@QuestionHome@Com

the first poem i read of yours i knew we were connected through life's ugly little secrets!. my mom is still alive, and will be 77 years old this year!. whenever i try to bring up the abuse she showed and put on me, she changes the subject!. i still feel the pain, hurt,even feel the physical scares!. i still love my mother!. i moved 2,700 miles away just to hear say, i love to too, at the end of a phone conversation!. have i forgotten, no!. but there is still hope i will!. continue your journey dark prince!.Www@QuestionHome@Com