I just sang in a band and this poem came to me. Is it good.?

Question: I just sang in a band and this poem came to me!. Is it good!.!?

"my eyes

Exhausted beyond belief,
stripped of all I ever had!.
Forced to die inside today,
now I breathe a renewed life!.
I see all without my eyes,
if this is what it takes me!.
Bring me to my battered knees,
then feed to me constant pain!.
I am but a slave to love,
remind me that I need you,
please remind me who I am!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This is deeply meaningful and written beautifully, one great line after another!. Your muse must have liked your singing because is inspired poetry!. The last line is completely haunting and a sentiment that I can really relate to!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.yeah it sounds really good!. That's cool it just "came to you"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes it's good!.
I like it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have no idea what it means!. That just flew way over my head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes ,and it make sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this one is really good!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it's amazing that you can write so many in one day!.!.!.if you took your time and wrote less often but more in-depth you could be a really talented (sorry more talented writer!!!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The line that really hit me the hardest was, "Forced to die inside today!." There is so much power behind those few words!. I completely understand what it means!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i was going to reply to the next poem but something told me that i would be too pained by past events to not make it all about ME
so i came to this and i really like it!. the things that just come to you in a flash are often perfect as they are w/o needing any revision!. keep this one like it is!. it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool beans-DP! I really like it!. Marvelous how things come one sometimes isn't it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like, 'I see all without my eyes'!. Very good line, indeed!. You do well after a band session!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

really good one!.!.!.!.!.!.!.steve !.!.!.shows the hope even if it looks impossible!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com