Another attempt at urban style poetry. At least I'm tryin. What do u think.?

Question: Another attempt at urban style poetry!. At least I'm tryin!. What do u think!.!?

"i'm right here"

I'm standing in your circle,
your gat pressed to my dome!.
I know you all is buffing,
I'm here writing this poem!.

The guts that it takes to kill,
man, you ain't even got!.
I'm dissin' all your circle,
ain't heard a single shot!.

Kid's who's pointing at my head,
should be home tucked in bed!.
All of you other busta's
are gonna eat some lead!.

If you're gonna pull a gat,
at least you need a set!.
Let this be a lesson dude,
you better recognize!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg that was so goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ummmm!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
I really don't know what to say!.
And that's hard to do to me!.
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Man, where are all the topics coming from!?! Awesome!

(one small crit, last stanza!?!?)

If you're gonna pull a gat,
at least you need a set!. *
Let this be a lesson dude,
(one you can't forget) * you better recognize!.

but, I'm truly admiring you work, Well done <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ummm good visual but the ending needs a little revision!. it's actually a really humorous poem if you grew up in the ghetto like myself!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't get it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com