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Question: I really like my new poem please give opinions!?
Midnight
Rest a restless body upon a window ledge,
identical stars shine communally - one rare shooting star for us to pledge!. Through moisture window pains gaze high up at a universe,
moonlight reflected by aluminum-bodied cars for its light to disperse!.
Porch lights channeling centering to a point in the distance,
pathways catching light – curbs causing shadows at night less existent
ice crystals frigid from decadent airs cling to street lights
a street in a neighborhood silent at midnightWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
SWEETNESS! I like the poem! GREAT JOB DUDE!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's pretty good, :) Much better than i can!. What style of poetry were you trying to do!? sonnet!? If so maybe you should rhyme a tad bit more, and I kind of had to stop and think every once and awhile so maybe make it a bit more clear!. :3 I give you a 7/10 Hope my opinion helps ;DWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like it!.
I like that it's unique!.
You could fix the meter a bit!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
AWSOME!!! its finished!? Cool!!
its really good!.!.!.!.^-^!.!.!.!.I like it! ^-^
Its really beautiful!.!.!.!.i love poems!.!.!.!.
they are just so!.!.!.!.!.idk!.!.!.!.amazing
and they are so full of feeling and
make u wonder and stuff!.!.!.!.X3!.!.!.!.
Its a really great poem!.!.!.^-^!.!.!.!.u did a great job!.!.!.
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