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Question: A short poem of mine, not complete yet!?
Midnight

Rest a restless body upon a window ledge,
identical stars shine communally one rare shooting star for me to pledge!. Through moisture window pains gaze high up at our universe,
moonlight reflected by aluminum bodied cars for its light to disperse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
!.!.!.awsome!.!.!.!.its so!.!.!.!.!.!.beautifful!.!.!.!.^-^!.!.!.!.
I would REALLY like to see the rest of it!!! ^-^ please
its really awsome!.!.!.!.!.me jealous!.!.!.LOL!.!.!.!.its a really good poem!.!.!.!.if u keep this up I bet ulll be a great poet!!!! ^-^ A really AWSOME ONE!!! XD!.!.!.!.

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Correct!. this is not complete yetWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it, when u finish could you send it to me:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its great!. you could add more but it seems pretty deep to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com