My poem, rate it please, thanks?

Question: My poem, rate it please, thanks!?

i see eyes
on me
i see them staring
at me
why i ask!?
why are they staring at me!?

then i remembered im in a play!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Ahaha very wonderful and good :) Keep it up!

I give u a star ★ and a 10 :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

and the play is!?!?!.!.!.interesting!.!.!.finish it and come backWww@QuestionHome@Com

its alright but the last sentence doesnt work!.
you should add a little more b4 saying "then i remembered im in a play!. If you need help, just ask me because I love to write poems and I had a couple poems published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the poem is rubbishWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I like it!.
I think you should add more!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com