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i see the full moon in the black night sky, i see the ocean so black and cold, i see me swiming under the full moon, with a smile on my face, im swiming swiming, im so calm and peacful, but then i hear a loud beebing noise, i open my eyes, the ocean is gone, its my room and my bed, im sitting here waiting for the ocean to come back!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.bu!.!.!. it won't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I LOVE IT!. you can really picture it!. nice flow!. good job

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not to bad seperate it like a poem tho in lines
i see the full moon in the black night sky
i see the ocean so black and cold
like that it will give the readers better understanding its good some lines i like alot just keep goingWww@QuestionHome@Com