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Question: A revised poem about life and God!.!.!.what do you think!?
FEEL

What a heart does feel is so intense vivid and real
It beats with soaring delight in the sweetest rites
That it returns the soul to celestial heights
However, its clenches of waving pain
Make us lose site in the happiness we gain
To feel can stop breath in the depths of sorrow
Until ones, soul seems empty and hollow
To live is to love but not without pain
For opposition is our teacher and hope for gain
In this mortal game called pleasure and pain
To hate is to die and live in vain
So live with love intense and real
Make the heart reach and want to feel!.
The creator of all and author of this plan
Wants us to become so much better then man
So fight and hold stead fast to His Word
And know that your prayers are always heard
However, pain and sorrow may be your lot
Trust in God, for he knows what needs to be taught
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
From a fellow Christian poet!.!.!.!.I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow this is crazy! It sounds like some of those poems I am reading in my AP class!. This is a truly amazing poem, and if all this came from your brain, you have great talent--keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I believe in Him!. I believe you said it all!. Well done and well written!. True hearts always fair well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com