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I think the title of this poem should be something along the lines of "Pursuit" or "Grasping", or "To Obtain"!. I understood the progression that was used to arrive at the perfect timing through planing and biding one's time!. also the idea of enjoyment after the goal has been reached is a concept that is lost on many people in modern life!. Many people pursue material goods, money etc!. without enjoying it!. It brings them discomfort and additional stress to try to keep it rather than relaxing and enjoying it!. I like the simple words that express a profound thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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It would help to have an idea of what your talking about!.
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You need to be well known to write like you do!.!.!. So many grammar mistakes!Www@QuestionHome@Com