My First Acrostic - Does It Stink?

Question: My First Acrostic - Does It Stink!?

Three worlds revolve a sun
Encircling endlessly
Moons there are none
Purposely set apart
The planets entice
And beckon to choose
Their inviting environs
Indecision pervades
Only one is allowed
Not an easy decisionWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Since I know what this is about I have an advantage!. I think this is excellent!. It is everything an acrostic poem should be!.
I love it!. You are indeed talented!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, it doesnt stink!. actually, its rather good!. i never write acrostics, but i read them!. yours is fairly well!. i like it!. temptation!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. something everyone must deal with!. good job!. keep it up!. lol :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely not!. I think it is very good, especially for your first Acrostic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is far from stinking!.!.!.it is very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

doesn't stink at all!.!.!.It's quite nice actually!. To paraphrase Dondi, you know it a good acrostic if it's not obvious that it's acrostic!. Had you not mentioned that is was acrostic, I wouldn't have noticed because it stands as a wonderful poem on its own!. The Temptation is in the choice :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poetry of passion insatiable
Leveled against a foe hard hearted
Erodes away at the coating
Again and again he stiffens
Let loose by her words
Even he cannot endure forever!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It doesn't stink at all! I quite like it!. I've never really liked acrostics much, because so often they sound preppy!. But you've managed to make it deep and sophisticated, and I really like the imagery!. It's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

On the contrary, it is excellently scribed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice, but it doesnt make me think of temptation!.!.!. But other than that its nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This may have an inside meaning, but it is beautiful nonetheless!. I suspect that the planets are symbolic of something else, and a decision must be made among three alternatives!. In any case, poetry should sometimes be mysterious and loved for its message and its form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know what Acrostic is but I like the poem!. I see several means by reading what the others wrote, as of right now I like it and I print a copy to read later!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Stink!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? LOL

Don't think so <3

Hmmmmm, I take it this maybe totally metaphorical!?!?!? If you look at it from my point of view, it's well, almost like an orgy of sorts (fantastic!!!!) I think this truly holds a double meaning, Brilliant my friend!.!.!.

Temptation, sw33333333333333t!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Three worlds revolve a sun!? Sorry I did not get this!. The rest was very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Telling you of this,
how do
I go about it,
seeing as affirmation

is already yours!?
So I read a little deeper,

awake, but always dreaming,
wishing that the meaning,
elusive, would come clear!.
Slipping across my mind
on the other side of reason,
my answer must be clear,
Evadne, you must tell her!.!.!.

That was an acrostic answer, I hope you understood!. Great one, and for a first, simply amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com