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Question: Filling You!?
I'm searching for an unknown,
An endless journey with no comfort!.
Time passes by in a surrealistic blur
While routines govern
My every moment!.
A deep dark chasm
Hides my soul!.
And I try to fill my emptiness by filling you!.
Day after day,
Night after night
I lay awake
Thinking of hatred!.
Thinking of lies!.
Sleep is gone!.
Left behind with happiness!.
I try to calm my mind by filling you!.
All alone in the world!.
An atypical prototype,
Life should be good,
But I'm alone!.
Nobody can comprehend my mind!.
I cannot comprehend my mind!.
I'm all alone!.
I try to rid myself of lonliness by filling you!.
I empty myself into you
But I only erode you more!.
The corrosiveness eats away
And I only dig deeper!.
It's too late to climb out of my hole now!.
Maybe I don't want to climb out!.
Maybe I like it here!.
I rid myself of worries by filling you!.
That's it!. Give me some feedback people!. Let me know what you think!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
!.perfect!.!.!.
sexual innuendos, and melancholy!.!.!.
!.!.!.fill her up some more!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
eff me please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Try FEELing you - not filling you!. They aren't a glass of water!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Depressing as hell!.!.!.
But much of the best poetry is;-)
Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very good , top notchWww@QuestionHome@Com
Wow you are deep I love this poem!!!!!!!! Awesome!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really didn't like it at all, but that's just me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
How long did it take you to write this, this is excellent!. :)
I love the double entendre of filling/feeling; caught me off guard at first!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
OHHHHH!!!! I like it a lot!! Very good!. I wouldn't make any changes!. Kinda melancholy poetry is the best!. The sadness to it is beautiful (and I'm not just one of those annoying yahoo people who read poetry on here and are all like "oh it was great" even though it wasn't really great!.) I really do like it !.!.!.!.!.!.!.And filling you!! Very good!. Do you write a lot of poetry or is this just something your trying out!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it is very good!! i like it alot!! very sad but still amazing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
you're thinking too much!.!.!.!.!.do you think it's a good thing!?coz it's making me unhappy to realize certain things that other people can't see!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.tragic things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com