Any comments........one from long ago...............?

Question: Any comments!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.one from long ago!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?

I stood

He tried to hurt me,
this last time!.
A whisper and a scream,
Never again!.
I couldn't bear!.!.!.
to see his evil!.
With closed eyes,
I stood!.!.!.
for myself!.
Never before could I!.
But now was my time!.
A whisper and a scream,
Never again!.
With closed eyes!.
And now closed heart,
I stood!.!.!.
for myself!.
He could never again hurt me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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A dark but strong message that was voiced well!. My compliments!. From a layout perspective how about space above and below "With closed eyes," This seems to be the turning point!. Just an idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i like it!. pretty deepWww@QuestionHome@Com

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awesome i like it =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats is really good, you should make some more ;) inspire more people!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow deep!.!.!.!.I wish i could write poetry like that!.!.!.!.Great job! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have some startling images and phrases in this poem!. I especially like "A whisper and a scream," "closed heart," and the refrain "Never again!." The poem illustrates strength of will and resolve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You stood, and strongly at that!. Bravo!. I like the repetition "never again", "A whisper and a scream", and "with closed eyes"!. These repeating as you have them here really add a powerful punch to the poem, one that more people should listen to more often!. Nicely written!. Bravo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm glad he will never hurt you again!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Very private and personal to put online for strangers to see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wat is ur question please
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