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Question: Is this a good poem, A distance!?/!?!?!?!?!?

you had me lost
by your touch
by your kiss
every time our eyes would meet
i would simply
melt
my heart would
shake
everytime i was near you
but you poked fun
at all my insequreties
every little imperfect detail
could not pass unnoticed
but it's hard
to be beutiful
to be what you would excpect
when all i've lived through
is ugliness and hatred
its hard to stop loving you
even though i can only love you from
a distanceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is so sad!.
You've expressed what I'm sure many people feel!. Sad is not bad, it's in fact quite good!.

If you want opinions from more than just regular people like me, a good writing spot id Gather!.

Best of luck to you!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com