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Question: Collabortive poem!?
Hi,

I did this before and it worked so good the last time I am doing it again!. Be really creative and out there!. The whole poem will be read at an lecture on collaboration where I am performing!.

Rules:
Stanza must be six lines!.
The sixth line must match my sixth line!.
The stanza may be about anything that brings you extreme amounts of joy, not just music, and only gets better until it maxes out, like what I wrote about me and music!.

Here is mine followed by two other submissions

when your favorite songs come on
and you turn up the volume
to get totally rocked
and then the next song is even better
but the volume won’t go any higher
yeah, it’s like that

when you see a pretty girl
on a lovely spring day
you just can't help but smile
and you're really gone when she smiles back
but you don't know her name
yeah, it's like that!.

I like candy
and naked ladies
when I drool, the top lip
quivers
and the bottom lip shakes
yeah, it's like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I can feel it grow
always thinking what shall I do
wondering what will be
sweet misery then a baby cries
and I finally see what means most to me
yeah, it's like that



can think of nothing else
mixing, stirring, preparing
waiting in anicipation
and finally the taste of perfection
chocolate mousse
yeah, it's like that


pen to the paper
a line begins to flow with a curve
slowly the pen begins to fill the paper
a spash of color
finally my masterpiece
yeah, it's like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com