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Pornographic Dreams

Pornographic dreams fighting against age
Restoring youth
Or so we’d believe
And fuelling a passion for life
That never really burns
Just flashes brightly, once,
Like magnesium flairs on blackest night sky
Then, again, nothingness
And the same old blank page
The same old blank look
The same old blank man!.

Pornogrpahic dreams
Simply
End, and nothing has changed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Old age need not be blank and bare
There's lots to do - just get out there!.

A famous writer, can't remember which, said (when his libido finally left him) 'Thank god!. It was like being chained to an idiot' - he felt able to concentrate on his intellect!.

Being a woman, obviously, I have no understanding of the urges to which men, old men especially are prone!. But, clinging to youth through moments of sexual pleasure negates all the wonderful things old age can bring!.!.!.!.!.!.a slowing down, contemplation of the deeper things of life, and wisdom (hopefully)!.
I liked the poem, especially for giving me an insight into the male mind =)- my favourite line
'Like magnesium flairs on blackest night sky' (skies!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Uh!.!.!.negative sir!. Not following!. Pornographic dreams can mean a young man but nothing else seems to tie together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know!. I really don't want to be rude but!.!.!. I reall couldn't follow or comprehend it that well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I'm saddened!.!.!.damn!. Don't know exactly how to respond, save that!.!.!.youth needs restoring!? Naw!.!.!.the mind, perhaps!.
Age always rails against something!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I'm gettin' up there in years, and I play my old 33's and 78's on the pornograph all the time!. As far as those hot flashes that you're having, I know just what you mean!. I take what I can get, and I better get it while I can!.Www@QuestionHome@Com