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Question: Collaborative poem please add on!.!.!.!?
Hi,
I'm trying this again because folks can't follow instructions!. So please, follow my directions before adding on!.
Stanza must be six lines!.
The sixth line must match my sixth line!.
The stanza may be about anything that brings you extreme amounts of joy, not just music, and only gets better until it maxes out, like what I wrote about me and music!.
I am trying to get at least ten stanzas or more
I want to get a good piece going so I can perform it at an art show I featured at to show how collaboration can happen anywhere with anyone!.
Ciao
when your favorite songs come on
and you turn up the volume
to get totally rocked
and then the next song is even better
but the volume won’t go any higher
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
when you see a pretty girl
on a lovely spring day
you just can't help but smile
and you're really gone when she smiles back
but you don't know her name
yeah, it's like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like candy
and naked ladies
when I drool, the top lip
quivers
and the bottom lip shakes
yeah, it's like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
we check, re-read all of the words
look to improve, so the words come alive
we find a groove
and words jump off the page
the edit's now done
yeah, it's like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com
my turn comes to ride the new roller coaster
climb in the car, strap myself in
up the hill, then soar down
into the perfect series of loops
that bring the butterflies in my stomach alive
yeah, it’s like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com
When you wake up for work and it's raining
Then you realize it's too early to rise
You sink into your pillow for a couple more snoozes
Snuggled up in your fresh clean sheets
Then you realize it's Saturday
Yeah, it's like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com
Sorry im going to do music too!.!.!.!.music's my life! Only thing thats honestly brought me joy!.
Not just something to listen to, something to live to;
Will change your life before you've realised whats different;
You've just been too busy getting lost in all you love
To keep any sense of reason, and
The song keeps going and suddenly you realise that,
yeah, its like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com