What do you think of this poem? PLEZ HELP ME !!!!!!!!!!!?

Question: What do you think of this poem!? PLEZ HELP ME !!!!!!!!!!!!?

OK!. So here it is:

the last black rose!.
black as blood!.
each petal soft!.
i pick every onne off!.
The velvet petals
slip down my fingers!.
Petals, racing down!.
one by one!.
Boucing on the ground!.
I drop the petaless stem!.
Every thing silent since then!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

OMG!.
This poem was fantastic!.
It seems to be a dark poem like there is hurt somewhere in there but it was excellant and i felt like i was there!.The discription was great i could almost feel the rose petals in my hand!. Great !Www@QuestionHome@Com

sorry to tell you this but it sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's nice! How about "Petaless Stem" for a title!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's very good except for these lines, maybe this instead, I drop the naked stem!. All is silent then!. Just a thought!. I liked it very much though the petals are so light they'd never bounce, maybe, float to the ground!. Title is harder because to me the poem sounds like you are now feeling empty inside!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I could not seem to connect it !.!.!.
first you say its black !.!.!. then velvet !.!.!. !?!?!?

you lack conjunction or adverbs !.!.!.
here's an example:
each petal soft - shouldn't it be each petal is soft
slip down my fingers - slip down on my fingers !.!.!.

aaaaah well !.!.!. it's just me !.!.!. but I really could not connect :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the end!.!.its good :)

tittle could be my rosy life, for irony!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Short and sweet!. Not too bad at all!. No one will read mine! Please look at it!

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OMIGOSH!!
THIS IS REALLY REALLY SUPER AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT WITH PASSION!
MY TEACHER SAID HE WOULD GRADE IT AS AN A++++++++++++++++++++++++++
LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com