Could you find the time to comment on these poems?

Question: Could you find the time to comment on these poems!?

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amn! there's quite a lot of it!.!.!.!.
i read the first four poems and i liked them!.!.!.
i'll find time for the others soon!.!.!.and tell you my opinions in detail!.!.!.

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The images are fine but it's not poetry!. You must try and give it form and make it sound beautiful to the ear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wouldn't say you suck, exactly, though if you did at least you'd have some use to the world!Www@QuestionHome@Com