What can i do to improve this poem?

Question: What can i do to improve this poem!?

dreams
peaceful, calm
sleeping, dreaming, awaking,
terror strikes my thoughts
hurting, frowning, crying
vibrant, vivid
nightmares

its a diamante poem:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think its realy good, and I like how you have the words like describing whats going on in a series, almost like a time line effect!.

The only thing is that I don't get why it has to be depressing!. Why don't you have it the other way around, and have the nightmare and then afterwards the good dreams!? its better cause it leaves you smilingWww@QuestionHome@Com