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Question: Do you like this one entitled the desert rain!?
9:46 and the rain won't stop
Thousands of tinkles of waterdrops
The smell lingers on my lips like conversation
Of past woes and contemplation
And a simple smile reminds me of desert rain
The sweetest rarity that I just can't explain
Uniquely I embrace your form
Lusting for a kiss!.!.!.just one more
Illuded by the somber of your shadow
And the clouds outside my window
Your suttle innocence
Is my penance
For my lack of charm
For leading my heart in the way of harm
I am only an amatuer
and you are the same
just a young couple
enjoying desert rainWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love it! It's Deep!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice one bro, but I like ur other one betterWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm having a little trouble with the smell lingering on your lips--lol--I think it's better with taste honestly!. But it's not a bad poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com