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Question: What do you think of this!? Can it be improved!?
There go the everybodies about their bussiness
and there sit the nobodies doing their work
None stopping to say even just one kind word to another
Seems all have forgotten the magic of love
As children all were accepted But now it's nothing the same
As the everybodies make their money and share it
with no one and the nobodies wash their laundry and hide it for fear it will be borrowed!. The elderly die and are buried by the everybodies and the nobodies only to be forgotten because we've all forgotten how to love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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There goes everybody about to do their business
and no one is doing their work,
Nobody stopping to say even just a kind word to another!.
The magic of love seems to been forgotten,
As children were accepted however nothing is the same!.
As the people make the money and share it!.
No one wash their clothes and hide it for fear it will be borrowed!.
The elderly will die and are buried by everybody only to be, forgotten because we've all forgotten how to love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Just correct your spelling errors!. That will help!. Be happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
personally ashley i think ur a slut!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i do not knowWww@QuestionHome@Com