Last poem of the night. I am tired. Your input is welcome.?

Question: Last poem of the night!. I am tired!. Your input is welcome!.!?

"quest denied"

Oceans of twisted shapes,
rescued from the carnage!.
Frustration felt deep inside,
I scream in total rage!.

A torturous embrace,
embedded in my mind!.
Hands around me grasp,
emptiness all they find!.

Paralyzed with sheer fear,
corrupted in my mind!.
Crying out in silence,
free from this damn life!.

Deep within my misery,
a deadly inner sense!.
Place of doom, sacred shrine,
punishment for all time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If I were to guess I would think that someone had opened up the pits of Hades and were staring inside!. Not a nice place to be for sure!. Locked for eternity within!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ohh i like the ending!.!.its inner turmoil, and analyzing this poem I would pick up sexual orientation problems just because they are familiar to me!. nice :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like your wording in this!.
I like it!.
Nice work DP:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are so damn deep to me!.!.!.!.i enjoy your poems!.!.!.!.they are very special to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Angst and darkness done well!. I from the light can only take one of these a day though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com