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Question: Here's somethig jsut playful My attempt at urban poetry!. Is is hard enough!.!?
"original gangster"


Yeah my skin is pale,
but I'm O!.G!. to you!.
I was born in L!.A!.,
home of the body bag!.

I now live in Denver,
I'm white and old as f*ck!.
My lyrical ability is
guarded by armored truck!.

I spit out rhymes like bullets,
like a robbery at a bank!.
You might take me lightly,
a very tragic mistake!.

I spent my best years slingin,
clocking with the best!.
Don't step to me clowning,
you best take back a step!.

Show me some respect punk,
I'm not just some white boy!.
Packin with a kevlar vest,
I'll put your as* to sleep!.

Even Five-O know me,
they know I'm the best!.
Next time that you see me,
you might end in the dump!.

My background is Italian,
this is no Sopranos sh*t!.
I'll lyrically destroy you,
leave you crying like a bi*ch!.

I stand six feet seven,
my hands bigger than the Shaq!.
I know I am snowy white,
but my game is tight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You are so funny!. This was fun!. I don't know what half the words you used mean - lol!. What do you expect from a lady suburbanite!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha onteresting , btw shaq stands 7 foot 1Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, you said it was rap didn't you! hehe I believe you now!. Would like to share it with a friend if I have your permission!? Thanks for sharing, I think!? nah, jk!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I believe this would go very well rapped !. It has a definite musical feel to it !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

so dark prince now i see light!.!.!.keep your poetry polite!.!.!.!.!.don't let your quest be denied!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No from me for urban!. A plus though for the attempt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com