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Question: This is about me!. I hope you like it!.!?
"clean"


I've been down this road,
too many times before!.
Walked a million miles,
as a hopeless man!.

So let this be a lesson,
a life of drug addiction!.
Neverending nightmare,
embedded in despair!.

I do not believe the things
that I used to see and do!.
I hold no culpability
for things I might have been!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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There is the touch of supreme sadness about what might have been making this both melancholy and uplifting!. To have overcome the ordeal of the drug addiction is a triumph, as is this poem!. Thank you for this very personal sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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BEAUTIFUL!
This is so nice to read, and you understand the person is growing, and leaving the past and coming cleanWww@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty kewl mate, kinda reminds me of me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It certainly sounds like an encouraging poem! I like the sound of it, the rejuvenating effects, the new lease on life feel!. It is good!. ThanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Based on your comment some time back about the amount you were taking I really wondered where you were headed!. This is one hell of an accomplishment!. Well done!. Your poem stands well in the recanting of this odyssey!. I still feel that you need to always know that it was your choice to do it as it is now your choice to be clean!. I might suggest changing the "no culpability" to a different phrase!. Great job and great poem!. My compliments Dark Prince!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is excellent!. You've been through hell and have freed yourself!. I am so glad to read this!. It is very well written!. I can't decide which is the best of the evening!. I especially liked the first one also!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i commend you on your honesty and your courage!.!.!.i have friends who have traveled down the same road and now they are clean and sober also!.!.!.!.being clean brings true wisdom!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo Dark Prince! May each day be a stepping stone to a bright future for you! Don't look back!.Www@QuestionHome@Com