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Question: One last one b4 dinner!. Do you like this!.!?
"regret"


Leave me for dead!.
I need no demons,
watching me tonight!.
If sleeping
does not kill me,
morning
surely will!.
Engulfed in
pure hatred!.
Hopeless it
shall be!.
Regret lasts forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I left you for dead,
For I am a demon,
And I watch at night!.
If I don't take you
in sleep, then You'll
die when you wake,
For my name is
Hatred, and my
Brother is named
Hopeless, and your
regrets will haunt
you forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Again I really like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It`s beautiful!. You sound depressed!. But I doubt you are!. I write dark/sad poems as well, and I`mm not depressed!. but I really like it!. You can set a mood well!. That is not something everyone can do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

your life sounded undoutfully very troubled at one time or another!. we all have regrets!. mine, i wasted so much time doing so little!. you are truly gifted!. sometimes good things come from regrets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com