No drugs and I can write anytin=me I want. How is this.?

Question: No drugs and I can write anytin=me I want!. How is this!.!?

"shadows"

Shadows slink in
to darkest deaven!.
Spirits are dancing,
in secret dimension!.
Shadows now crying,
a gloomy night!.
They seem forgotten
in misery!.
The light of hope,
shines never more!.
Into thier eyes!.
Shadows imprisoned,
tween
dream and reality!.
Silently wait
a solemn recall!.
No consolation
in the kingdom
of God!.
All is eternal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Dare I to say!? Yeah, I dare!.
Exceptional verse, visions of darkness (excuse the pun) in which even the shadows are trapped and helpless, and all is as eternal as my love for poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
I think it's quite good!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

What can I say, I like your work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its really good but there is something about the word tween in line 13!.!.!.i dont know if i were you i would put between in!.!.!.tween just sounds a little akwardWww@QuestionHome@Com

My goodness!. A constant state of desolation - eternally!. A cruel sentence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

walk under a lamp pole at night and you will see three shadows, the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit, or me, myself and I!.Www@QuestionHome@Com