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Question: Post your best poem youve ever written here, best poem '10 points'!?
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um, Im only 13, so take that to mind!.
actually 12 when I wrote this!.
Its the only poem I've published; I'm having a bit of a writers block right now!.

The Moonlight and the Stars

As I'm trying to sleep in my cozy little bed,
I glance at some moonlight shine above my little head!.
I stand up,
and try to look around,
and I see some stars shooting to the ground!.
As I realize I need to make a wish or two,
a star shoots through my window,
and into my shoe!
I look through my window and what do I see!?
A baby star, looking at me!.
I raise my little hand,
and say, "hello"!.
It smiles,
and starts to glow!.
When it told me to get to bed, I realized this was all in my little tiny head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

naw i wont!.!.coz you gnna copy it:P nd give it your gf!! i knw you matey;)!.!.hheeh

aint that foolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know the best poem i have written on here as i have not posted many but i do have a best poem of mine but i wouldn't dream of writing it on here as it is a bit!.!.!.dark!? It's called Disolving Lives!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Heh!.!.!. heh!.!.!. right and then what happens to it!? But hell I've posted stuff here before and on-line elsewhere so I'm obviously not concerned with somebody stealing my work and making millions because poets never make millions!. This was an assignment I made up for my students where you use a cliche as your title and uncliche it, or examine the ridiculousness of it, or anything that comes to mind !.



Funny as Hell

You described the beast as a being
the size of an oversized Mt!. Everest
with antlers the size of oversized icebergs,
icicle fingers so long and snowball feet so huge
the abominable snowman is his personal chef!.
He speaks in a voice so cold the words freeze
halfway to your ear
where they collapse to his cavern-floor with an echo
that splinters your ribs!. This
big brumal bully finds it befitting
to hold fort in an ice age,
seated at the end of a hallway so long
you get lost walking in a straight line
and constantly slip on cold so blue
the Caribbean is jealous!.
His sovereign throne is sewn with plush polar bear pelts
the corners jazzed up with caribou crowns
foudroyant frills of snowy owl feathers
and little laces of lemming for fringe!.

The walls of his frozen
Forbidden City are ornamented with trophies;
heads of gods of hell; chums
in high school he beheaded
during his race to class president!.
Tartarus whom he tossed into
one of the bottomless pits the boy had built
in Bottomless Pits 101!.
He ripped out Balor’s lone eye and turned it
on the poor chap’s entire Celtic clique of classmates
creating a crest of corpses
the size of an oversized avalanche!.
Then he smashed the mirror of retribution
and forced Qin-Guang-Wang to watch his life unfold
in fragmented glacial melting slowness
before slicing him like Szechuan beef
and casting chucks of carved carcass into every imaginable hell
the Chinese church had created!.

The temperatures here are so unfriendly, so unwelcoming,
so incomprehensibly inhospitable, his third girlfriend,
Hel hailing from hellish Helheim Hell Hall the original hell,
a place so icy you can hear ice scream,
still curses herself for forgetting her coat
every time she comes to hang out!. So cruel
is this sultan of Siberian shivering this
mogul this
maharajah this
Mikado of mind-numbing polar perversity
that Death calls him sir
and God sends him a birthday present every year
just in case!.

So it’s no wonder
his face looks flabbergasted,
fists raised in a frightened shield
as I put her winter wonderhell on ice,
and deck her jaw with boughs of folly declaring,
“If you EVER hurt my friend again…”
your teenage tongue applauding with a tbbbth!

? Bear 2007Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have several poems that I like I can't decide which one to put!. What kind of poem are you looking for Sad, Love, Anger!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

September Eleventh
September 11th was a terrible tragedty,
we lost so many lives in this attack!.
but we have never really lost anyone,
we actually gained thousands of angels!.
we all could hope that we can turn
this fearful time back, but we can't
we all have to gather together!.
we all should pratcie peace and love forever!.
we hear so much discrimination!.
we should hear love within our nation!.
do you really want to live in hate or
would you rather live in harmony!?
as so many people died!.
America sat back and cried!.
instead of thinking about ourselves,
think about the people who tried to
save all the lives on the planes!.
think about the kids who came home from
school and their families werent there!.
think about where we would have be if we have
started a war, where would we be, Where!?
Just stop and think and you will be aware!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't post my poems in Y!A, or anywhere on the Internet for that matter!. I don't want my hard work stolen (not that I'm saying you're going to steal my poem)!. I don't trust the Internet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com