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Question: What you think of my poem!?
Soul

The light,
Of your soul,
Is going out,
You must light it once more,
Raise your head up high,
Even tho it hurts,
Tears run down your eyes,
Stress and Anger Is taking over,
Your life spirals into circles,
When you think its over,
An Angel comes,and touches Your Soul,
You realize,
Your Loved,
You are you,
You should never change,
The Angels flys away,
You try to fallow it,
but,disappears in the sky,
This story you tell,
No ones believes,
But,you know inside
The Light is Lit Once More!.


I dont think its that good tho,what you think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
'needs further improvement!. Try using figurative languages!. Don't make it too plain and literal!. also, try to give that experience some meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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