I need to step outside while this poem dries. Do you like it?

Question: I need to step outside while this poem dries!. Do you like it!?

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Physical Plant
by TD Euwaite

Oh, keeper of the special thing
that brings forth pungent odor, we
call unto you!. We beg of you, please
extinguish the smoldering dung

The truths you foretell cannot
be as ominous and foreboding
as that smell, an odious forecast
premonitions of doom odor

Gasping beneath the cloud layers
the oracle of spasmodic retching, sees
a future sulfuric, bituminous, choked
in noxious fumes, rendered, plasticized…

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It seems that you have a fixation of glorifying the gross!. The more scrofulous and miasmatic the subject, the more you revel while rolling around in it!. You leave me no choice but to say, MAN U R Excellent!. Keep on pumpin' them out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOL, that is so funny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's cra*!Www@QuestionHome@Com

eww!. sounds gross!. =PWww@QuestionHome@Com

boring!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We are soon to be the next Venus!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very funny!. I spasmodic is such a great word and paired with retching just makes it even better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

organic and green !Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem needs lots of drying!.!.!.I mean a desert wind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG yes, I love it!
thank-you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

First and foremost: what a beautiful way to articulate a title!. That is exactly how to edit a poem, too, isn't it!? To leave it alone!. Give it room to dry!.

This is a wonderful, wonderful piece!. It completely transcends those standards we set on internet poetry!. I especially liked:
"Gasping beneath the cloud layers
the oracle of spasmodic retching, sees
a future sulfuric, bituminous, choked
in noxious fumes, rendered, plasticized…"
Wow!. Just wow!.

However, this poem doesn't really end!. It could be so amazing with one powerful line to wrap up all this strength and beauty!. But, besides that, don't change a thing!. It's awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am glad I have a cold in my nose!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is national baked bean month, for god's sake, open a window!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Something reeks thats drying in the sun!!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Very pungent but GoodWww@QuestionHome@Com

We use "Oust" The "air sanitizer!."
Hidey-hidey-hidey hooo!.!.!.!.!.!.
Bjjjbjbmjbbbbjmmitz (I have no clue how to spell that bit!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It reeks of volumnous repungency my liege!. Wherein shall we find a noble hero to save us from this mulch of squandered humanity!?

A true billowing decomposition TD!Www@QuestionHome@Com