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Question: Want to read a poem, I suppose!?
This road, this life, only some can see!.
I don't want to be one of them,
One of them I don't want to be!.
I want to be careless,
without a care in the world!.
And, yet, I care;
Too much I think!.
Their thoughts, their actions,
they fly past as I blink!.
I long to be perfect, oh, how I wish!.
But I think I'm far from there,
I care to much, and yet I get none back,
I want someone to share, someone to care!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Brilliant!. Is this your Major!? I can totally relate to this!. Maybe I'm wrong, but this is what I got!. Not wanting to care about what's going on around you, yet you get pulled into all of it!. You cannot detach yourself, because everything has a hold on You!. Though you care about what the world is about, the world shows none in return, but gives you the worse of the worst!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats soooooooooooooooooo beautiful :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love your poem you should write in another poem like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice!!Www@QuestionHome@Com