Please Critique My pOem!?!?

Question: Please Critique My pOem!!?!!?

I think I no why
my heart breaks
i think i no why
my eyes water
i think I no why
its hard to sleep
i think i no why
we didn't work out
i think i no why
i won't miss you
i think i no why
you made me cry
i think i no why
you had to dieWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Instead of no it should be know!. You need some closure at the end!. If you think you know why you should reveal it!. Something like:

I think I know why
You had to die
For the last time
You made me cry

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