Back to the dark. How is this poem.?

Question: Back to the dark!. How is this poem!.!?

"full moon"

Come to me,
silent,
all in black!.
In your eyes,
obscure passion!.
Brushing me
with pale hands!.
kiss my neck
with cold lips!.
You appear
when the moon
is full!.
Cerulean face
brightened by
flame!.
Whisper,
dark love!.
Our souls
joined forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I adore this poem!.!.!.short sweet and too the point!.!.!.it really sounds like something that I would have collaborated!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its quite good but i would consider revising your wordingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Romantic, sensual, and poetic!. A good combination!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is just twilight zone cool- you actually used the word cerulean- i have this place that i go in my astral travels called the cerulean sea/sky it is the color of dusk- to get there you must be able to steer by the stars under ethereal mists!.!.!.

alright you've broken my writer's block see, you do have magic!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very dark and romantic!. I love it prince!Www@QuestionHome@Com