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Question: This poem has quietly gone home!. Is this the best thing!?
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by TD Euwaite

Have you ever made a friend you couldn’t lose
Or a party faux pas that slips right out the window
My errors are often spectacular
Grand mixes of muddle and gaffe
And I laugh too loud
“Burp!”
Excuse me…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I've never made a friend in life,
That I would want to lose!.
Nor ever has a friend I've found,
Been one I would abuse!.
But errors have I made a lot,
Some great and others small!.
And laughing at a noisy "Burp",
Is no mistake at all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To answer your question: yes, it needs to take a rest and stop blaming itself for those faux pas!. Time wounds all heels!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Spectacular error are often just that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Have you ever made a friend you couldn't lose" Now there's one to think about!. I've had a few party faux pas myself, but I don't care to comment ;) also, I don't think anyone can laugh too loud and I burp regularly!. So, you are excused!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it so much that i'm gonna *star* this question!.
i give it a 91/2 out of 10!!!!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most errors usually are spectacular
( at least here )!.!.!.!.!.!.All freinds are like a bottle of wine They age well with timeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Thought I made a Friend!.
Thought I will never lose!.
Make a friend how can I lose!.
Lost a Friend, heart aches!.
Slice of life my Friend takes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com