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Automated Glory by TD Euwaite They let me hold the flag today And we marched I guided men across the field And we marched I saw the general take the lead And we marched Shining saber in his hand And we marched We aimed our muskets toward the fray And we marched In skirmishes we volleyed fire And we marched The battle seemed to last for days And we marched Hundreds wounded, hundreds died And we marched *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yes, you marched in automatic manner!. Did you have a choice!?Www@QuestionHome@Com This repetition does indeed march well!. Sad is how it was so true!. Well done oh private!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The repetition of "And we marched" lends strength to the poem!. I dedicated a poem to our servicepeople yesterday in a form called a "Quatern!." Perhaps you would like to take a look at it!. The title is also very fitting; I could see the soldiers marching like the wooden soldiers through the fray!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Again with the marching!.!.!.!.!.always marching!. Marching, marching, marching!.!.!.!.!. You sound like my son! Hahaha!Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it , the "and we marched " thing makes it really interesting and special!. you're very good at this please could you check out this http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes it did!. For the love of country and bravery!. Men died!. Those who believe in freedom, for all humankind, knowing their blood may spill on its ground!. They were chosen, one world, one heart, one purpose!. In their heart, they cannot fail!. And even if some falls!. still there will be another to stand and marched!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked this!! very nice!!! 8 out of 10!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Great poem, I think of afew things with a poem like yours you wrote up I think of the Remembrance day service I go to each year!. Then the fallen Canadian soldiers that occured from 2002 that number of deceased is in the 80s Because these soldiers march march march become wounded or die!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Marching to the beat of drums You marched!. Ever onward over hills You marched!. The words of battle penned today, You marched!. It made my day to read it And you marched!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |