Read my shakespearean epitaph and please tell me your honest opinion.?

Question: Read my shakespearean epitaph and please tell me your honest opinion!.!?

Shakespeare, you were a man of fine drama!.
We felt your angst and hate in Othello!.
We read your humor in the great King Lear!.
Your quill runs across yellowed parchment,
words of human flaw and human nature!.
The question was “to be or not to be”,
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's pretty good, trying reading it out loud to a relative or close friend this way you can gather more opinions and make any adjustments!. Hope I helped!

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