This poem has frittered away all its time. Is it bad?

Question: This poem has frittered away all its time!. Is it bad!?

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Man in Mirror
by TD Euwaite

Sobriety is a slow ride
Along the same path where you fell down drunk
There is no “I” in inebriated…wait, there are two
Intoxicated, damn…
I know I will find a word
That justifies blotted jocularity
I, and the time, were wasted at the time…time!?
I can hardly be blamed for that!.

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These two poems are very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ehhh hmm i dont even know what to say its got a good backround to it but with most people in this world it might confuse themWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes there is a lot of I's in that especially since I took the time to count!. Justifiable jingle says I!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Been there, done that!
I like it! (The poem, that is!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting poem!. What is "blotted" jocularity!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is somewhat disturbing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool! Am I my reflection!? or Is my reflection me!?

Do two I's make a me!? Well, there is no me in inebriated!. We can justify anything and this poem is justified, appealing and quirky !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem complements its subject very well which it is most probably meant to do, and feel you have carried it off very well in deed!. Certainly it is not bad POEM on the contrary it is a very good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Stop g-g-g-giving yourself a ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-hard time and don't give me b-b-b-best answer if you were th-th-th-th-thinking about it as my ha-ha-ha-ha-hater is on the loose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Staring pie eyed at the mirror,
Staring pie eyed back at me!.
Who would think I'd drink so much,
That my face I could not see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com