Not dark from me. A prayer almost. How is this.?

Question: Not dark from me!. A prayer almost!. How is this!.!?

"why"

Here me,
my Lord!.
We are dying,
bleeding ruins
of the world!.
Suffocated
souls!.
Forsaken in pain!.
Men raise
their voices
to you!.

From our hands,
children's blood'
Dragging ourselves
to our end!.
why Lord,
come save us!.
Ebony
has ended
the sun!.
Eternal night
rules the light!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

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That was good!. Not your best!. but really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Amen!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!.!.!.THIS IS THE BEST ONE YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, AWESOME !!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've done what a lot of men have failed to do when approaching God;

Taken responsibility; by not "Blaming God" but acknowledging "He is able" to make the impossible right!.

I know you might not think of this as a prayer by your comment, However, A prayer is "Communion with God" So this is most definatley a prayer and is as good a prayer as there can be; (it comes from out of your heart)!.

This work, shows a high level of spiritual maturity!.

I love it!! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com