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Position:Home>Poetry> Just tell what do you think about this poem ! an 11 years old kid from Egypt madQuestion: Just tell what do you think about this poem ! an 11 years old kid from Egypt made it!!? while I’m at the mall, shopping for a card , my heart broke a part! while I’m at the lake, I hold my rake and then I shouted this life is fake cauz' no one, no one,noooooo one, can feel the same that I feel for you when the rain just stop to rain I feel so shame that I’m blaming you !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. ( oh and any suggestions to complete the poem please write it down)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I liked it but can u plez put me as best answer cuz im running out of points to ask questions with!thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting , this would make a good song I think !. Good luck :)Www@QuestionHome@Com You shouldn't have deleted my answer!.I answered your poem with a poem!.You little kid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |