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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of my friend's poem?Question: What do you think of my friend's poem!? It's kind of in the middle of a larger poem, but tell me what you think
To the white sand I may speak a name, fertile Albeit in a stranger tongue!. Tree names, flower names Deliberate, gainsay death's brittle cript!. Meanwhile The wind that knots itself in one great death-- Coils and withdraws!. So syllables want breath!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wow so deep and captivating !. I really love your wording and your command of languageWww@QuestionHome@Com very shakespereanWww@QuestionHome@Com nope, don't likeWww@QuestionHome@Com Reminiscent of Shakespeare, and Milton, I agree!. In the style of classic English literature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com One of the few decent poems that I've seen posted here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting, but to me your friend seems too caught up in using big difficult words to worry so much about the symbolism or sense!. Perhaps it would make more sense taken in context of the greater poem, but as it is, only bits and pieces seem to make any sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |