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Question: Love poem !.!.!.!.do you like my poem!?
why cry!.!.!.!.
!.everythings satisfactory at the saddness factory!.!.!.
im not them
!. im a condem that turned satisfaction to the saddest fiction
read my book and you will see that love is not a note or wods or condems
its the feelings that cundems my soul
its the feeling that makes my heart flutter
at times it will make my spirt shutter
but its the feeling you give 2 meWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's beautiful!. i love it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

no!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a little too emo for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

im sorry but not reallyWww@QuestionHome@Com

omg its kind of sad
im sorry to say but i didnt like it that much cause its sadWww@QuestionHome@Com

i dont want to be mean, but i dont really get it, its a little sad :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it's really good!. you get your thoughts through in an interesting way!. keep it up and follow your inner voice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, I advise that you check your punctuation and capital letters!. also in the last line please change "2" to "to!." I cannot tolerate the usage of numbers in such a fashion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com