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Question: This too was to be in the book!. I screwed the date up, so i am redoing these!. Do you like this long one!.!?
"dread"
What do you see,
close both your eyes!.
What do you feel,
deep down inside!?
Why do you need,
to feel my pain!.
Why even try,
I'm almost insane!.
Treading this path,
just like before!.
Try to forget,
scars on my soul!.
Try to understand,
depths of abuse!.
Why was I left,
out on the loose!?
Somehow I knew,
what lay ahead!.
Droplets of gray,
no purple, no red!.
Words you say,
mean nothing at all!.
I hide in corners,
trying to stand tall!.
Wounds in my heart,
small shallow soul!.
Prayers I have cried,
so long ago!.
Time it is gone,
won't come again!.
I'm sinking deeper,
into true sin!.
Tragic it seems,
all of this hurt!.
There's no tomorrow,
yesterdays dead!.
Late in the night
all has been said!.
It is all over,
bells ring again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Excellent again for the dark side! What is this book reference you talk about!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yesterday Is dead and gone,let It go!. Write your poems for you for today and tomorrow!. Good read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is a great redo!. I'm impressed!. Especially since i can completely relate!. Judith S!. or whomever answered 2nd on here!.!. is wrong!. Sometimes it it nessecary to look behind you!. Not everything is ahead of you!. In fact, most things dont ever seem to be!. If you only look one way, you narrow your own path!. You center it down on that one thing!. And it takes over your life!. How can one find happiness living life that way!?!? She can be right in the sence that you cant dwell completely on the past!. So the way you write your poetry is fine!. If you did it any other way, i'd be upset!. Good job!.!. dont loose your dark streakk!.!. xoxoWww@QuestionHome@Com