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Why no tomorrow, yesterdays don't exist!. In the night I dream, nothing ever changes!. The sky implodes, tears pour down!. Days painful end, dreams, all gone!. Deep within my heart, bitter tiny streams!. Waiting for the sun, to reclaim it's fame!. There is no escape, hear my silent scream!. This makes it harder, for the dead to sing!. Down into the dark, on bended knees!. How deep the river, of true fate and hate!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Bravo!!! wonderful redo Steve!! perfection is something seldom called upon to be truely grading of someones work!.!. but your work is beyond exception!.!. xoxo!! well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com its really good!!!!!!!!!! its fantistic and amazazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Actually quite good for the dark side! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree with neonman,well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not so good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |